It's finally finished
What medium was it done in? I think most of the problems are in the facial structure. Give her a more defined facial outline. The nose is too high and her eyes look off. Put a little more time into the space between her nose and her mouth too. Otherwise the anatomy looks fine but the yellows in her skin could be tuned down.
J. Christopher Schmidt
Comic Book Artist / Illustrator
It was done whith painter. Thanks for your comments
Her nose looks realy weird, like you based it off micheal jacksons...
also the colors look grainy and unsaturated, and the left iris is too close to the nose so it makes it look like one eye is cross-eyed.
her left eye is too small and doesn't come close enough to the nose....I also agree with toning down the yellow on her skin....also her ear and jawline need to be moved up the side of her face...