Here's the colored version of a sketch I posted in the sketches section.
comments and critique are very welcome.
I like it. But I dont get the WINTER... She does not seem to be cold.
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tgfx : thanks, well it may be that the name makes sense only to me
carnalizer : thanks, actually I'm planning on doing some comics in the near future
DaveTheOriginal : thanks, you can be sure I will
Awesome. I love the background and the painterly feel of it all. Good job on the lighting as well.
David - www.davidfournier-artist.com
hmm how bout same girl, same pose - but summer
I like it. Reminds of Danger Girl. Nice painting job
This is f@#$ing hot. Is she single? I love the color and the texture of it.
The background and the clothing are handled beautifully. For the longest time there was something bugging me about the face, and I just figured out what it is. Her mouth isn't lit consistently with the rest of the piece. With that kind of uplighting her upper lip will catch more light than her lower. As it is now the two dark shapes of her upper lip and the area under her nose blend together, giving an almost mustache like effect. Also, where is that little highlight in the center of the shadow of her nose coming from? It breaks up the form and makes that shadow look dirty (too much contrast).
Everything is looking sweet except the thumb on the hand holoding the ziggie. It doesnt seem natural, go for a more loose and relaxed pose on the.. err.. thumb
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djfournr : thanks
Boris : that's not such a bad idea, not at all...
DRESDEN : thanks, I guess she looks a bit like Natalia in dg
Stormdar : yes, she is single
Elwell : thanks, everything you pointed out is probably true, but I think I won't be working one this one any more. As for the highlight on her nose, I guess it's supposed to be a style thing... or something...
yfront : you're right about the thumb, thanks for the crits
Beautiful! Great pose! I like the light from below. Reminds me of David Rhodes' work I've seen posted here...
Cool pic, nice colors and lighting situation, lovable babe... gj!
Last edited by KaiS.; August 29th, 2004 at 08:58 AM.
Sorry for my English, it's self-taught.
Hey WOW, Dark huh!
I saw it as a totally different style when you posted the sketches. Guess thats how important a coloring job is