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Hi! This is the very first thread I dare to do in CA. I hope this work is good enough to be here; but if it isn't I would also like to be told why so I can improve my technique.
Thanks for watching!
Hi, XAVERIVS no doubt about it your work is good enough to be here, I think. Having said that there are some areas that could be better.
Her pose for instance is a bit off, doesn't tell much about what she's about to do. Her facial expression doesn't fit with the story I think you're trying to tell. You put a pretty strong cast shadow of her nose on her right cheeck but that lightsource isn't present anywhere else.
The stars in the sky aren't convincing and the perspective is kind of boring. Don't forget to add atmospheric perspective as well. This can help your image a lot by adding nice depth to it. For instance the dead guys in the background are as saturated as the main figure. They should be toned down to put more focus on the main character.
But I think my biggest issue with this piece are the buildings in the background, they're flat and don't seem to be affected by that one point perspective. Their shapes don't converge to that point.
See what i mean ?
You should probably do some basic perspective studies with cubes and spheres and stuff, this can help you a lot.
Check out my work on ucheachonu.blogspot.com
Thanks a lot for the feedback, Uche Achonu. I'll take every aspect you mentioned considered seriously.
Hi Ohhh. I agree with the dude above, basic perspective, lighting all that jazz. Some stuff I think that could make this much better, even if you wanted to continue with this piece is: add shadows for the bullets/ figure. Continue the figure's shadow onto the mech on the ground, it should sell the lighting we don't see. Definately change the stars.
And put some age on her armor. If she just finished kicking alien ass, she's bound to have some scars or damage.