Stunning work. The way you' ve done the cigarette and the smoke is awesome. The ride side iof the face lacks a bit of detail ( compare to the right).
It reminds my the last scene from the movie Jeeper Creepers
Anyway good job.
Really great work, your handling of the forms feel like they have volume is done really well. The only crit I can give is, that's it's generally not good to have something leading off the corner of a composition, as your smoke is doing...in this case you can get away with it since the face is so large that the smoke doesn't have the power to bring the eye down to that corner.
I didn't even notice that it was done in acrylic, especially good technique you have, it looks like oils.
Last edited by jupiter10; December 24th, 2008 at 11:23 AM.
Yeah, I agree with you Jupiter, the only image showing there is the close up for some reason. The first image thats not working now was showing the whole image, I'll try to re attach it here, the smoke has a little more breathing room in the whole canvas.
Ah I see. hmm now it seems a little more distracting, and since you have more space around the sides, it may make more sense for the smoke to be going slightly up rather than down. But others may feel differently. Great pict though.