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so the game started and all i do is keep saving, so right now im jus' mashing the B button til it looks right. Now I feel as much shame as a masochist should feel, an' wana continue my journey on the rolled up paper called the map, so shout, send, spam, or whisper advice on what a critic gots on his mind....
Last edited by Niku; October 24th, 2010 at 01:08 AM. Reason: I came backż
Didn't know where i was quite going but i know i wanted to color, but if you haven't noticed I copy and pasted the file, I want know if any knows how to convert cpt. files other wize my next is gonna be as big as the last...
This one of my concept characters in perspective view, which is not finished, and going back and forth on the coloring, but if you noticed it was cut and pasted again...
Yeah, the first pic you posted was quite large...
If you are serious about improving, then you have come to the right place.
CA is not about asspats, it's about artists helping other artists improve.
Now, there will people who will give you their critiques in a nice way, some in a not so nice way..but there will definitely be gems of advice in what
So to start with, Welcome to CA.
And now my comments based on what I have seen so far..
1. The imagination is there, I see you like to draw females as well ( that is always a good thing in my book!)
2. Now, you need to practice human anatomy. Go through CA and you will
see a lot of links to the very useful Loomis/Bridgeman books.
You can even see some very useful anatomy studies in most of the
Studying human anatomy will only help you take your art to the
It may seem boring to do these anatomy studies, but you must do them if you want to someday make really amazing female/human drawings.
Post your progress here in your Sb and I am sure others will come along and
give you more helpful advice.
Keep on drawing and I hope to see more!
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the fruits of my labor...
so where does this one strike ya?
my characters im working for a story im puting together...the lil' one suppose to be the main boss and this chick comes on in l8er but you can see here shes kinda disfigured but im working on it, and this next one, shes the lonewolf or something like that...her top and skirt are suppose to be a design =)
this is one of the drawings i touched up if you haven't seen the drawing in my link to myspace, and gave her the ablitity to regenerate, and decided she also be in the story of my production
Shes part of the girls I drew to be models in a different project...personal wise
This girl was made since i couldn't fill in the gap of boredom, but was thinking she has to be put somewhere...
My own hands, almost cramped doing the double-jointed hand pose...
Than hands without reference...I know there painful to look at...
A few guys where I don't know where to put...
I like the monster holding the dude, but don't know why i put a porcupine in...
Couldn't hack it, so had to draw another mystery...curves do it for me...
Around the corner veiw...
Trying out a rabbit concept...
the necro chick looks kinda like a kid, but it'll do...
It looks like you are getting better with proportions. Right now, most of your drawings seem to be completely absent of Anatomy. I would highly recommend studying Anatomy thoroughly, it will help you're art so much. Also, study the works of the Old Masters carefully. Learn what makes them so great, and seek to emulate them so that you can be great too.
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HOT Dam~ all the women a man needs. good perspective on most of them. just keep them studies up and keep drawing. what i can recommend is getting a contour line of the whole subject, then work in closely with the anatomy. or vice versa, which ever works best for you. other than that your improving on a high level, keep the motivation up.
hummm what i recommand, is to do some structural studies of the human body first to let you really understand its function and form
Other then that keep up the good work =D
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Haven't been on the ball l8ly, I did a remake on the uniform that im working on, or outfit here I redid it again, so It'll look more combat efficient at the same time look cool...and the the hand drawings I did when i woke up, doing a self observence test...oh and the concept uniform i was working on is on the link to my profile on myspace...
You are diligent, keep it up!
Your studies are improving but whenever you switch back to manga style there is a significant drop in quality. This indicates you do not know the structure of the body well enough yet to be able to invent poses or abstract the shapes. So I suggest you stick to drawing from references for a while to get to know everything about the body. Not just the surface, the bones and muscles underneath it as well.
And don't neglect the face either, manga faces only get you so far.
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Most of this is just scattered, or am i just filling CA with bad concepts T.T, but on that I hope you find what I had as ok and thanks for giving me advice even with it ends up as a book on the shelf, look and enjoy....oh and how should I improve on drawing the breast, I know its for my cause, but i end up checking out and not absorbing, plz help...
oh this dude is part of that imperial suit im still working on
I think im starting to get the body after some studying on loomis and body studies
hey man, nice work on the shading. the 4th drawing on the new updated has the most captured light. you have used the paper to bring out the lightest on the form. your also improving on the form and proportions of the human anatomy just a few adjustments can make it right, but only time will show.
A Few Tips: Don't use outlines.
The aim of realist value drawing is to show the light and shadow and surface tones, creating a three-dimensional illusion. Outlines only define visible edges and don't tell us anything about light and dark. Linear drawing and value drawing are two different 'systems' of representation. Mixing up the two can be confusing, if realistic drawing is your aim.
Keep up the Excellent improvison.