Looking for help with the cloud in the background mostly.
Last edited by ShockWave; May 29th, 2007 at 08:01 PM.
They need more depth and volume; right now that background looks like something i'd see airbrushed on the side of my uncle's van. The sun also has a watered-down lensflare effect going on. Other than that, it's a little empty, and doesn't help direct attention to the subject. If anything that sun actually steals a good chunk of the attention from the Master Chief himself, and that's definitely not something you want.
I know you didn't ask for it, but that figure could use a little tightening up as well. The linework is a bit too sloppy for my liking, but since it's obviously a work-in-progress i'll let this slide.
Don't worry though; you've got something good going on here but it just needs a bit of refinement. Hopefully others will be more helpful than I was.