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I like it, the colors are cool...
I donīt know if is just me, but i think there are some perspective problems, like the right foot, itīs to small compared to the left one.
And the left shoulder, seems the left arm is higher, so the shoulder should be a little bit higher to.
Well i hope i helped man.
Hmm, ok. I agree with Raposa about the left shoulder, the arm should either be bent or the shoulder raised to give the impression of a normal size arm. Right now it looks really short. As it is the right arm is longer and farther away, a perspectival impossibility unless you want to foreshorten the left arm. Give it a once over and you'll get it.
Good work, not quite finished though. Another question, is this just practice, a graphic or what? What is the purpose of this piece? As a practice piece, and potentially just a graphic, I think it works fine. However, if you want to bring it further, try adding a light source and an environment so we can see the foreshortening and your perspective a little better. It's hard to judge how people floating in white space actually look.
whoa cool :3 i like his pose and the perspective.(although as said above, it looks off in a few places)
Hmm the only thing i can think of that hasn't been said before is the tattoo looks to vibrant to me. (I know it sounds kinda silly) Like instead of using pure white, use a slightly duller color.
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=93365 my sketchbook ;3
Cheers for the comments guys!
Pheep, to be honest there really is no purpose to this peice... just practicing my style and trying to improve upon each peice I do.
I suppose its just a graphic, not a scene. The W below his feet is indended to make this peice more of a logo. W is my initial... as its kind of a self protrait.
I agree about the tattoo, i tried using a few different colours but I decided to go with these.
I guess the whole colour scheme is a bit vibrant and surreal... so I felt it fits in.
Thanks again guys!