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You could work more on the angle that the pizzas are supposed to be turntables. Make two of them, with the volume control and stuff in the middle. also work a little more on foreshortening and study up on how to draw comic styled faces. the figure isnt very dynamic as it is now.
i agree with slash,
you could elaborate on the idea a bit to make it clear. also, if this is for a t-shirt, you might want to give each colors its own layer. the black outline being the top layer. each colors will need to be separated any way.
this will give you an opportunity to clean up the outline a bit as well.