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im trying to get this one wrapped up by Saturday for portfolio review day. any crits will be welcomed
I'm going to have nightmares of giant Scyphozoan's leaving my neighbourhood in waste.
Great job though!
Love, Life, Lemons, Lemonade...mmmm lemons.
what i think needs work: straighten out the balcony decks. some are uneven.
is that water or concrete around the grass? try to define that more
gate in forground should either get more detail or delete it
clouds maybe? or sun?
try moving that tree in front of the building more to the right and lets see some debris
debris from the bricks and shit would be cool. otherwise it just looks like the building was already broken and its just flying thru it. flying debris might give it more action
try to add a person to that balcony? and some on the ground to show scale of jelly.
hope some of these help, lets see an update when ur done!
thanks for the advise ill work on that after i get home from school today.
Yeah, I agree. Debris would be the main thing that'd improve the image. Maybe you should try adding a few highlights to the jellyfish? You've got quite a high contrast on the building he's just flown through, but not on the jelly itself.
I'm with Pojo, I feel the Jelly needs some stronger highlights. Not only to match the light on the building but it will bring the jelly itself out more and give it that really 'jelly' sort of feeling