You've got some really great stuff going on overall. I don't really have crits. I think you deserve some stars *click* Another rising star, I see. Heh. Keep it up dude.
That last head doesn't read quite right to me, mainly the far leading edge, which i know is a total pain in the arse to nail.
Stuff in your toned sketchbook though is really nice, I especially liked you fold studies
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=219464 - Portfolio review thread
Maerrick - i agree! hehe. Thanks man!
StarbonesCoffin - Woot! thanks!
PerinGalitte - Thank youu!
SmartKyle - Hah yeah, definitely. Ill probably work on that some more. the folds were soo much fun. Thanks!
Miles_ - hehe yeap! Thanks!
pat- Thanks man!!!
MattGamer-yay for freaky! Thanks
Heres a portrait I did of my best friend...
Im thinking of putting this in my portfolio,cause its a pretty good painting,not my best,but I think its a good idea. She posed for a super long time sooo I think it deserves a spot in my folio for college. Sorry if it looks all crumbly, its not in real life, my camera is just low on batteries!
Well, Dish, you kinda forgot the eyebrows there, but else it's a pretty damn nice light and colour study....
Also, you might wanna check the lines in the environment behind your subject. They're not meeting up....
BLAST! 10 pts. rofl.
"The fact that no one understands you doesn't make you an artist"
Sork's SB - Crits appreciated - not getting updated atm
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Hey dished! Thanks for replying in my book, took you long enough! ( 1 thing about that, I guess i forgot to mention that pen and ink tiger is from 2 years ago, the wolf is the one i did last week!) Im drawing my ass off, and I think you really need to join me soon, I need to test out my computer with the open canvas network feature, im pretty sure that ill be able to see my tools again unlike my old pos pc.....
im sorry i dont have any critiques for you right now, i need to get back to drawing... but i will hit u up on aim, when i am home... really looking forward to drawing with you again!
Just for the sake of it, the mona lisa was my april 1 joke. corny i know :]
anways here's one i JUST finished. more to come the next update! Gotta get rid of the lazy bug.
Miles- Thanks for stopping by!
Matt- \o/ thanks!
Vorance- Thanks :]
jamie-Doh yeah! sorry bout that! Thanks man! we gotta oc sometime soon. Thanks for stopping by!
like Shrooms without taking the Shrooms!
tiny update worked on stuff at starbucks last night. fun little sketchgroup meeting :]
from life, for the most part
Cool stuff in here! Keep in mind what i said about the values!
Update dammit! Moar hawt boyz.
Slash - Definitely! thanks!
cookie-Nyahahha! thanks for stopping by lol.
One thing to look at is the head/face more often, and the muscles/bone underneath the skin, i find a recurring thing with a lot of 'characters' is people make don't bother putting any or little effort for character into the face or particularly the hands and leave the face in a neutral expression or the hands in a basic position and call it done.
Having said that, you do put some effort into the expressions for your figures and critters, but I think you can push the envelope much further. Hand studies and skull/facial muscle anatomy (forehead, eyes, nose, mouth, jawbone, cheeks, ears, everything!) I believe would be a positive direction to go in line with the portrait shots you're doing.
An example is this that at the same time I like for the subtle difference;
Whats in common with these three? They all have the same expression, but the right figure's hand is in a unique position which draws me to it straight away, not because the figures got 6 eyes or is in robes, they're irrelevant at that moment just because of the position of the hand and placement of fingers. People communicate the most using expression through their face and hands. I believe all others like clothing, are secondary to those two.
I love this thread. YOU ROCK!
Keep us updated.
Hey Dished! (Fellow Vegas-ite!)
I just stumbled on a super old thread you started for a Vegas sketch group. I was wondering if you were still trying to get something like that together? I know there's a few events in town that offer figure drawing (some at the Arts Factory are weekly) and there's also a local Drink and Draw group that gets together on the first Thursday of every month. Just thought I'd pass the info along
If you have myspace, check out my page - the groups for both of these are on my top friends. They are called "Sin City Art Group" and "Las Vegas Drink & Draw"
Good stuff man, I think you should focus in the anatomy. You obviosly have put time into learning that stuff, but a little more could make you a great artist.
PS: Everything looks cool except for that protrait of a woman. Doesn't even look like a woman, and her eyes follow me in a diabolic ugly way.
DanC- Thanks buddy! *sharp pencil eye poke*
Luftwaffles- Thank you verrry much! more head studies for me then.
TigerMilk- Thank youu
Chupacabra- Thanks man!
Evil_Sloth - Slofffy! thanks
Jska- heyy! Thanks i definitely will! do you go to the life drawing at the arts factory much?
lennon- Thanks man! i actually just got an anatomy book im photocopying :]
Lake - noo (
worxe- Thank you verry very much ! ill definitely practice that more !
Just got back from life drawing today! And another digi with really crappy anatomy
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sweet, digital life drawings! Did you bring your laptop to the session?
The rendering on the face of that smoker boi is hot
Cute robot design. Inspired by Wall-E?
alrighty! another filipino representin!
the force is strong in you.
you may be a "short filipino kid"
but your art is definitely growing!
I SWEAR ON THE GRAVES OF ALL THE TALENTED FILIPINO ARTISTS WHO HAVE GONE BEFORE ME, THE FILIPINO ART LEGACY WILL CONTINUE!
MY DAY JOB http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=136204
MY ANGRY SKETCHBOOKhttp://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...129015&page=13
Den - heyy! thanks! yep, slightly yeah we got a couple other people at life drawing bringing laptops,its pretty fun!
theangryfilipino- Arr! Salamat!
Life Drawing from today, gonna render some more later..