I think the big thug is a mess. But I'm reather happy with the naked one.
Well the "big thug" isn't very big, the gimp would be like a foot taller if he was standing. The darks could be pushed more, it's in a general grey right now. I assume the gimp had some reference but not the thug. Compositionally weird, it's off balance and the thug's shoulder is uncomfortably close to the border. Could use some variation in the rendering too, the thug seems to be wearing a tattered loin clothe which merges with the stomach tattoo. Leather mask(I assume) looks to be made with the same material as the loin cloth.
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The anatomy is not working, the naked guy´s head is enormous.
The other guy´s chest is oddly shaped, no clavicle and is not reacting to perspective....And the legs are too short.
Anyways keep trying, this kind of things are the hardest to get. Using reference is recommended
away from what the 2 guys before me said (which I agree with strongly)
I like the way you drew the standing guys hand
I don't understand the scene tough
why has the kneeling one the spital symbol painted on the chest? his gasmask doesn't look like one of the spital cult of doctors
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Thanks guys, I'll work on it later on today.