This is my first post in CA, even though I've been visiting the site for a long time now. These are sketches I made dealing with this world I have created based off of my life, mostly dealing with my family.
Are you going to write a book or further an idea based off these? Interesting creations and designs, but it seems the progression should go farther? Like to story line, or book. I have no crits beyond that besides perhaps make the second a little less flat? The first is very vibrant, and the character is 3d... the second is flat and 2 dimensional. The rest aren't as 3 d as the first, but show much character... I realize this could be on purpose due to metaphor and idealism... you are trying to project a lifestyle here. But I can't think of anything to add beyond that and nice first post.
the style is very animated and active.. it works well to convey the story of a very imaginitive girl and her brother/family interactions. but its weakend by the soft fragile linework. the colors play well, very bright and warm. thicken your lines, make them be noticed [in your sketching that is] for your painted work, you seem to paint without lines and it works well also, but it drastically changes the style. try to stick with one, ore if youd like to use both, incoporate a common element to aloow the two to compliment each other. the bleanding needs work also but that will come with practice. very entertaining Vuduchild, good work.. and thanks for finally posting - JAG
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