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This is very well done, but I keep trying to make the egg the focal point and it doesn't work. It looks like the face is the focus and with it smack in the middle of the image, I think it's detracting from the interest. I'm not saying a central focal point can't work, but there's the face, then it's surrounded by the terrain, which is surrounded by the edges. It creates a bit of a trapped feeling.
Perhaps if the egg and the elements leading to it were sharpened, it would shift the focus a little. It would certainly make a subtle change in teh feeling of the piece (more about the egg than the giant).