i liked the original sketch better...not showing the feet...or maybe just show a hint of a foot. also the pose in the sketch makes it seem more ominous...like she's thinking more about what is going to happen and doesn't like it. i would have added a bustier or something...i think it's unusual that she isn't wearing some kind of undergarments for that kind of dress, even if it's just a fitting.
I got to agree with that but Im also feeling a lot more at the sketch XD
I find it helpful to make a small clay sculpture in the same pose and put some light on it and see how that helps the entire process.