Hey there Hai! You are very talented.I agree with the first reply(you should watch proportions), but i see you started to fix this problem. That hand-woman really made me smile. i like the concept and the pencil work very much. one more thing: try to make the women less men-like (put less muscles on them). Keep postin'!
Last edited by Keenox; March 4th, 2007 at 07:13 PM.
Everything beautifully done, and you've realy managed to communicate a design well. Her hands and and clothes realy does stands out. IMHO some of your best work.
You gonna do more on that paining?
Ps. So you play computer games? Might I ask which types you enjoy? Personaly I rejoice in http://www.ta-spring.com/ and http://redorchestragame.com/, as you see mainly fps and rts.
Last edited by Glatteveier; March 11th, 2007 at 05:38 PM.
Wow, thanks!Everything beautifully done, and you've realy managed to communicate a design well. Her hands and and clothes realy does stands out. IMHO some of your best work.
Yes, eventually. At least I hope so.You gonna do more on that paining?
I play a bit of FPS, like F.E.A.R. Played a bit of CS and Halo back in the day. I don't play much RTS, though I did have a Warcraft 3 period when it released, and Empire Earth was the second game I got for my first PC.
My true passion is RPG though. Things like Arcanum, Neverwinter Nights, Diablo, Titan Quest etc. And of course, FF7.
By the way, I guess we have the same curriculum. What are you doing at school right now? I was wondering how the different schools went through the curriculum and maybe we would be doing the same things at the same time sometime.
Last edited by Hai; March 12th, 2007 at 05:41 AM.
Hey, i missed some great updates. Good drawings you are cranking out lately!
Those tumbnails look good. Maybe a lot more?
The match 14 update, i don't think the hands are too big. A hand is suppsosed to be as long as the face, bit the head is definately too small
The other bodies you're drawing are becoming really well structured, and some great poses. Your hatching is developing well also!
The girl in the 18 martch post is looking a bit too cyber with the others from the group I think. More experiments in OC couln't hurt Succes!
Cool sketchbook! Interesting concepts, and your figures have really come along since the first page. I especially like post #143. #166 was showing some really nice progression in the shading, will there be more?
This last dude, I like the design, but I'd love to see him with a bit more shading. He looks a bit flat, the cloak especially, as if there's no body under there. What does he look like under that cloak? ...Unless he's not wearing anything, in which case I don't wanna know. XD
Good stuff, keep posting!
Thank you!Cool sketchbook! Interesting concepts, and your figures have really come along since the first page
I'm really more of a hatching man. But I'm sure there'll be more shaded stuff here and there.#166 was showing some really nice progression in the shading, will there be more?
Hey, you asked for it:What does he look like under that cloak?
Hi Hai, I see lots of improvement in your sketches. Though I am keeping my suggestion that you should take them a little further. Your are taking your working to a point it is starting to look good and then you give up it seems.
I would like to see how it would turn out this last image you have posted, or the one's in posts 165 or 166.
keep it up.
I know, I know
I do intend on finishing this last one. Problem is, every time I say I'm gonna finish something, well... I don't. I seem to only finish schoolwork. I think this is a rather serious problem, and my biggest obstacle right now. But I'm working on it. Hopefully I'll get somewhere, soon.
Long time no see man my favorite in this thread is the "roman woman" from march 8th. don't know why but it is. But hey, what do i know, you still teach me from what i can recall:p