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A project for a class. I would like some critique on this, if I could get some. I have no ideas for the hair on the bald guy so if you have any I would appreciate your input. Updates through the final, due saturday.
A picture with people in a dynamic/interseting setting/situation. I like it due the dramatic tension and enviroment in which the drawing is.
In a box?Originally Posted by MarshA picture with people in a dynamic/interseting setting/situation. I like it due the dramatic tension and enviroment in which the drawing is.
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dogfood, how is it you remember Hogan & Schultz, et al? is that show still in syndication somewhere besides the 4th dimesnion?
Elwell -- isn't it obvious the dramatic tension arises when the bald guy can't figure out where in that blank room the other dude hid his rug?
Marsh -- no offense, but the drawing gives no clues to what's happening. there does seem to be a small amount of tension between the characters based on expressions, but as to why is extremely vague.
Oh, Masque... would it freak you out if I told you I remember seeing some of the later first-run episodes? Besides, the less important something is, the more likely I'll remember it. (Battle of Hastings - 1066, first Ronald McDonald - Willard Scott)
Marsh, I see it now. Um, the only real tension I see right now is what the far guy is doing with his left hand. There's not much dynamic about guys standing there using mental powers to make toast. I'm sorry.
Think about some of the scenes you recall from movies that you thought were interesting, tense, and dynamic.
no more than realizing i saw the premiere of that show, and i wasn't in diapers! and crap, now the theme song is running through my (alleged) mind! argh, Alzy plaque attack or something...Originally Posted by dogfoodOh, Masque... would it freak you out if I told you I remember seeing some of the later first-run episodes?
Hi here is my idea for the scene
its taking place in a subway
I hope it helps
It helps alot Infinit!!!
I love Hogan's Heroes!!! I have only watched the 1st 2 seasons... and I was born in 1989...
so he's going to stab someone on the subway? good thinkin' on the subway car though... uses same exact perspective you wanted to use in the first place...
I'm taking a varitation of that and making it a bus top instead...
Sewer system very old school ninja turtles!
Alright got a different scene, red circles are places I think I need help with...
why did you change the pespective so much?
the othe one has had much more tension
(and please don`t cut off the shoulders all the time)
for the face: look at teh overpaint I did for you it shows the position of the eyes and the ear with the cross
Well I redid the whole drawing on a seperate sheet of paper... here is an update, red areas are things I need help with...
ah, the one with the sword seems very thin, and the nearest guy have a very big nose... I think you should redo the guy with the sword, and put more balance in the nearest guy.
but it looks pretty good otherways