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man your stuff is amazing. Your SB was one of the many that inspired me to start really drawing again. Keep it up I really want to see more!
Love the figure drawings the best. and the foot, it's tasty...XD
Gnoll! Wow those life drawings on the brown paper were great...funny characters too, good eye with some of that linework I must say.
Almost at 60 pages that must feel great...hell I'm happy to have 3 decently full ones. Done any color practice the last while?
Great figure drawing!
I like your doodles.
Damn nice dump dude. Your improvment seems to be gaining momentum at an exponetial rate. Keep it up. Gives me hope.
Nice dump indeed! The "barf" one made me laugh real loud in this cafe Im sitting in. Most people think im weird and look at me with fear... O well cant be helped... Your lines are really confident its inspiering work. cant wait for a finished comic! I dont have any useful crit at the moment but keep posting progress and I do my best.
I never take offense to comments, and appreciate them very much. I dont have any formal art training, not even highschool, so all the people I admire on these forums (like yourself) are my teachers. Feel free to lay into me, once I get my scanner up and working Ill do a massive paper dump of things Ive been working on at work. I went through a bit of a mental breakdown recently. I tattoo for a living, and seeing all the good art and realizing my skill level was noobish was making me feel like I was ruining peoples lives by not putting the best product on them that they could get. So I tried to step it up. The general populous' has very low expectations for tattoos however, so the only one that is disapointed is me. Sorry to rant on your pages though, I did have a goal. Question, what is a good book to study composition? that is what I think I need to start with. Thank again I really appreciate it.
The brown paper white chalk stuff is looking just awesome! Keep it going!
That stuff is looking cool. I don' have time for a crit right now cos I'm in school, I was basically stopping to say I added you on msn so don't be suprised if someone called spazazo starts trying to talk to you. Cya around
Dude dude!recent stuff comic is cooooool!keeping drawing!hehe!I'd like to see more UR stuff!more!!!
living like cartoon ,money like water!
@Dreamworker: hehe ci sono alti e bassi, e qusto purtroppo è un update decisamente peggiore hehe grazie Paolo!
@Dan Valkar: glad you people like the worm dude (Bego) thanks for the visit!
@ODISAP: thanks, will do!
@dadushin: thank you very much, hoe you'll stop by again soon
@lennon: oh ok, guessed it was spanish. thanks!
@Mr-Joe: was a pleasure to hear that, thats the whole point i guess.I should probably try and ink t soon.
@Carnifex:more positive feedback on Bego (not "beego", "bego".Serious comic stuff? hopefully soon, hopefully soon Tips on form? well, do the studies, observe from life, try and rotate the bits that make up the human body as they were 3d models in your head, try and see them in "wireframe", always think in 3d
@GOBLINSHARK: cool Gobbo, glad ya liked those!
@maxetormer: argh, i was expecting some serious ass beating from ya till next time, thanks hermano
@Fllnfalcon: haha TASTY! yes indeed, that foot is tasty. thank you very much for the nice words
@Jakers: color practice.Wish i had done some... and 60 pages, well, yeah feels good, apart from the fact some people have incredible improvement in only 5 pages, while in my SB, there isn't much difference between page 1 and page 50
@jordyskateboardy: thanks Jordy
@MonkeYoakum: thank you very much...uhm, unfortunately i think the "Momentum" is fading away quickly...actually i don't think composition is a good thing to tart with...i'd suggest the best thing to start with is Loomis's book "figure drawing for all its worth" you should be able to find it on the net
@B-Man: haha lol, weird you liked the barf one actually, i can't wait to see a comic drawn by me either.Gotta work more!
@kischi: thanks thanks thanks!
@Pascallo: thanks! will post more soon
@spazazo: oki thanks for the visit
@banhatin: ha! it was a surpire and a honor to see you stop by here thanks!
ok peeps.Not a good week for drawing the last one, i'm afraid...i'll try n do another update soon
And thanks for the positive feedback on the worm guy, i'll draw him a lot more, and i'm working on a lil' something about him.Bego is his name, anyway
And err...nope, didn't do any color practice this week.
I knwo, i'm a loser
feedback of any kind is appreciated as usual (i know i know, there's the huge "color" issue, but there must be a lot more too, so beat my ass)
more soon, hopefully
daayum lobo looks badass! wormie too.
i guess next time i have to be more clear in my requests (to have you stop by my sb)
Wow! Incredible work. I love the cartoon style. I think the anatomy is giving the drawings a good credibility which make the stylization more convincing. I'm also enjoying the ink and marker work and would love to see more of that. Your thread is an inspiration. Don't stop drawing.
Oh man really stoked to see you rock on one topic for a while, I dig the style, a good mix of simplicity and anatomical correctness. I will stop my current study and take your advice on figure drawing. Im going to post my best example of figure drawing right now. I feel like you have accended to another level of goodness. Can't wait for more. Thanks!
these sketches feels very cool man, nice and confident. That cartoony character is awsome and I really dig your classical approach on the heroes. Keep on rocking man, LoBo's my fav o_O
Woah man... I dig your take on LOBO hes a altime favorite. Used to play my old metalalbums and dig into Lobo comics. Simon Biesley is one of a kind. I dont even think he sketched first he just drawed with ink right away.
Your character is cool, a lot of rock n roll an no bitching around.
Awesome work lately and hatchings seem to be getting together really well. I like the sculpted impression they add to the toned paper studies. Looks great using white on the background too even if it blends with the contours a bit. It's hard trying to come up with crits useful on a general level when you're so damn good but you asked for any kind of feedback so here's a few pedant's nitpicks. On the second sheet about the worm-headed guy, the left side figures' elbows seem more like bends than joints. On the rightmost gesture, the backside of his nearer hand seems to bend like it has no fingerbones. Your curved bones look great though but I at least prefer the joints sticking firmly to their places so the proportions aren't open to interpretation. this character's right knee seems to be very low though it should be higher than the resting leg's. I'm also pretty sure that the big muscle in the front of the thigh is attached to the kneecap, now it seems like there's something in between. I think the curly haired motorist could have some of his details removed with the overall appeal just improving (the focus seems to be everywhere) but on the next sheet, you seem to have already removed everything unnecessary. That's a real pleasure to my eye with the spontaneous background shading and all. You've nailed the moods with the worm guy's expressions too. I bet school's going great.
I like the Iron Man and thats one hell of a cool rasta man!
really nice stuff, I love you comic/cartoon character. Your life dawing are are also really nice. The stuff from your head it looks like some ofthe proportions are off. Man I got to get my ass in gear, your not only better than me, but your also younger! keep up the awsome work.
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Nice update! I love the worm guy and Lobo, good job mate!
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Daily improovements here, Ryan! I like a lot the way you use the pencil.
The Lobo's sketches are a pleasure for the eyes, nice dreadlocks, nice bike, great portraits (dove accidenti sei andato a pescare Moon Knight? Non lo vedevo da quando avevo 15 anni!).
Bego rocks, man! Love his sad mouth when he smell the flower. Instead of that small revolver I would like to see a "cut piped shotgun" (come caspita si dice "cannemozze"???).
Now we want to see a Chirstmas version of Bego, draw it!
Ehi, Bego è ermafrodito come i lombrichi? ;-]