I love the character on the left. There's a lot of details into the drawing, and the textures are just great. However, the little scratchy lines are distracting, especially the few at the top. I don't understand them. The overall composition is rather heavy on the left, and the tiny little man on horse in the bottom left corner doesn't seem to go with the rest. He looks like a toy figure there. Is there any story behind this painting? Maybe that'll explain a lot of elements in the work.