I'm liking the 'chapter 1' page a lot, especially the top. The lower stuff however kind of bothers me, (obi-wan in the corner?) It feels to me like they were just pasted on with no relation to the rest of the images whatsoever, they don't really have a 'unified' style. Maybe you can solve this by filling up the blank spaces with some black and white forms like you did on the cover. Otherwise nice concepts and techniques, keep it up!
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Cool layouts, I like the design variations for the cover. All of the portraits are very straight on, it might add some more interest to show some different angles of the faces. Nice work man, I dig it!