samothing i made for fun,it's a free concept for nothing ,just to take some good time,if u like comment and crit
Yeah, what the others have said already - if you ignore her lower legs, the body looks fine... but those legs are definitely wrong below the knee.
Also, the structure of the knee there looks weird, as if you're making it up rather than going by any realistic knee shape and form.
Her right forearm looks a little flat, I don't think the lighting is so consistent there.
Face and hair are very nice, and I like the costume a lot
Maybe some sort of shadow below her boots to make her look like she's actually standing, would help? Also the white background is a bit cheap, at least some shading or subtle colour there would look a lot better than just flat white with no cast shadows.
Ah well, good work overall - very sharp!
DUDE that looks a little painful... I mean... Her... Nipples are like being ripped over to the side...
But, seriously. That's kick ass in every way shape and form possible.
Love the flesh. Agree with the knees. Very cool.
To me, those thighs are *colossal* when compared with a relatively petite upper body (oddly muscular right forearm notwithstanding). Also, IMO you're lost perspective on the zip, the hair looks waxy, and the boots seem a little flat to me.
The other thing throwing me off with this one is the 'stuff' coming out of her fingers. I'd suggest either removing it, or doing something more with it.
One last thing - even if it's only a hint of one, give her some sort of background. Doing so, and providing the necessary shadow, will give her much more of a sense of 'place'.
Looks like it would make a great character design for a fighting game with the exaggerated proportions. I really like it. I'd personally prefer highlights on the knees to accentuate the bigger masses, although it works as it is. Good stuff!
lol- when i loaded up this thread i could only see the image down to the girl's waist. I thought "finally a woman with some relatively realistic proportions!"
As soon as I scrolled down I saw those enormous thighs! Oh well...
Actually- I really like the way you've done the skin and muscles- it seems pretty obvious that those thighs are intentionally exaggerated so I don't have a problem with it- I think the muscle in her thighs looks quite good, fairly fleshy.
I'd have to agree, the hair and face don't quite match the rest of her body in terms of the way you've rendered it and she does look like she's either gonna fall or she's leaning against something.
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thanks for all the feedbacks,i agree with the crits,some parts are not so clean.
i like too stylized anatomy,truely adds diferent feeling.
man, your ladies are so hot! the rendering of the muscles and the colors you choose are just great. really nice stuff.
thanks guys,here one more its for a comic book, one of the bad characters hope you like it,comment and crits are wellcome
Love the fist one, ( and you dont need to hear about the knees again, and you know the rendering is great )
But the second one is really really good...i mean the character is cool, but more than the rendering and design, the color and the possibilitys of it in each scene will make this character really interesting...and i love the outfit
Good luck with that comic book
Last is cool, but Im not shure about white bg.
Last is cool, but Im not shure about white bg. It make figure more siluethe like.
the comic should be interesting
'd like to thank god for all he's done in this work. all this art we enjoy and love he makes so beautiful. It really is one of the greatest gifts.
whoa.. your style is really.. interesting.. great design on those characters.. but those legs of the girl are just WICKED MINDED!!
very cool concept!!
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i love that last one alot. the first one just needs some touches around the legs.
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both the characters look great,i agreed with therest of them on the off balance of the gal.otherwise,it lookssolid
I looked at the male villian character and it's very good. The only thing that keeps bugging me is the length of the arm holding the sword. Way too long compared to his body and the other arm.
Your colors are great, the clothing designs are great...just the proportions are off, but that's subject to the stylization you are doing, I suppose. Theoretically, that guy could be a mutant with one long arm and one regular arm, lol.
Portfolio and website coming soon!
Ban- you gotta start making these characters fight!!! Create a drawing where we see your style of artwork.. really fly..! that would be awesome... seeing that ooh, so cute girl and her bone crushing tighs beat the pants off of the skirt guy!
Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd
I like the second one a lot, especially the angular quality of the fabric.
I think your colors are real nice, but the knees and legs are bent to far back, they also seem to be disproportioned compared to the rest of the body, plus her right arm is way too long, and the head seems too small.