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Something I've been working on for the past week or so. I'm never drawing anything with water ripples again, and these arent even real water ripples...their simplified! wtf!
Anyway, i'm not too sure what to think of this, please feel free to tear it apart.
I like this image.
The monsters right arm looks a bit long.
A bit more sharpness / contrast around the boys eyes would be good, but anyway, nice painting.
I really like the image overall... I could see your painting skill shine through here.. Im just wondering about the water ripples..? thats very shallow water and theres very little indication that they are actually sitting in a pool of water.. also, his right horn is very flat.. one more thing concerning the background... it seems like you are going for a more real look to your painting yet you gave the background a very non-real look... maybe make it look more blurry or give it some deminsion... add some dark planes, etc... I really like the white sky.. gives the viewer a sense of purity, which is somthing I believe you were shooting for.. Overall very nice.. Nice feel to the painting.. reminds me of a Egg Tempera painting.. Beautiful
Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd
The only thing that seems off to me is the plane the water is sitting on vs the background. It seems like they're on this pool of water and down in the valley behind them there a bunch of mountains...
I love the way you did the kid! And the monster is freaky, but has a subdued feel to him. Nice.
really wonderful piece. I like the composition and your pallet really pops the kid from the monster. oils or digital?
I like this a lot! The faces, especially, are nice.
This remind me of an illustrator, C.F. Payne. I'm not sure why though...but his name immediately came to mind when i saw the image. Although, i'm sure he'd never ever piaint a monster/ogre.
i just discovered your work, and went on your website : nice pictures on it ! I like the style you're developing,sober and detailed at the same time, and I think you are very gifted.
This particular pict needs more contrast, in order to see better all details on the monster's face, for ex, and to give punch to those 2 characters ; those ripples are too regular, in a wrong perspective compared to the way you posed your characters, and they need some points of pure white to make it look wet.
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It's a beautiful piece, no doubt about it .. but I think it could stand to have a bit more contrast. Right now the lighting is pretty flat. Ad some more definite shadows and highlights and you're gold.