Take care of those crits. You really should start using big brushes. There's no need to crosshatch when working digital. Also, watch quicksilvers' image, try to soften up on the colours
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Nice effort waka, you doing a allstar improvement!! But let that not be the end, break down what u already know, to even simpler shapes. The guy you drew has life, well drawn. Try to push urself keeping the detail till last, draw the overall first. Discepline is the key to success.
Very cool improvement goin on up in here. I like these BW illustrations, doing like this will help you to know what to emphasize in a finished piece.
The eye studies look great. Next step is to draw em in relation to rest of the face, then relstion to the rest of the body. It's great to really work at one point of the body, but once you feel you've got it down, work at it with the rest fo the figure in mind.
Big man is lookin great!
Cool stuff mang!
Good update! Like Hurricane said, the head is definitely the best part! Your lines are most confident there...
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ok, bought a davinci book, love his stuff
heres a lame "study" of davinci:
and my thunderdome... didnt have any time at all to do it, uni work took all my time. so i did a lame atempt.
hey man, it seems you been OCing a lot, really cool stuff going on.
keep up the hard work.
Hey dude. I'm seein massive improvement here in just three pages. Just wanted to show some love. In this one: http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y136/wakazou/piss.jpg the hand on the left has a dimple on it that looks a little too dark, you could just leave that dimple out and i think that would be a pretty sweet hand. keep at it dude, u'r improvin like a mofo.
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Hey man it was nice chatting last night/morning. You've gotta great sketchbook started so far. The only suggestion I have is to focus on your line quality, thicker to thinner and so on. I like to emphasize corners and certain contours. I think the best advice I can give is to not overdraw the subject. Start with a series of light loose line work then pick and choose the ones that work best to darken.
I did a quick paintover to demonstrate some of the things i touched over in msn. Also, check reference for the hands, take a photo of your own if you cant find anything online.
Like I said on msn... definate improvement! Keep pushing on the last one! Crit that hasn't been mentioned (I think): Maybe you could try to give the dude behind the woman a little more twist in his body? Might not work though... just a thought... And listen to Slash
first off congrats on the win, you deserve it. you are pumping out some good stuff. theres huge improvement from the first page. have you had the anatomy books out because you seem to be making progress with that too.
one thing i think you could work on more is edges. when to have soft edges and when to have hard edges it will save you a lot of time when painting if you pay a lot of attention too it..
anyway, keep it up
Hey Waka, NIce update man sorry I haven't been online much for a bout 2 weeks. I went on vacation back to the midwest home. I'll have to try to catch you on MSN. Keep up the good work and keep an eye out for my sketchbook update!
MUNIZ: no problem mate, well get this ssg going
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here is a thumnail for class:
a oc session with hyver:
shit for class:
and my bike, been riding alot latly
thats it, enjoy
Thats either a HUGE bike, or a tiny little chair.... Pretty eye boggling if you ask me.
I can definately see some good progress shown here, so just keeping practising doooooooooooood
(PS, it'll be great to see you in Brum on Tuesday if you can make it It'll be fun to have a sketch and a pint with ya )
Cool Bike! maybe do some sketches of the thing? Or better yet some hybrid skeches like a half human half bike man or what i like to call the "HHHB man: harder and softer than a HB pencil all at the same time".
Ummmm ok, maybe not. Ither way keep up the good work!