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Hi every body,
this is a painting for an expo with the topic ofthe Flying Machine I hope it will plaire to you
Not too bad. There are a couple things about it though...
I think you need to add more texture, right now because everything's so geometric, it's reading very flat.
Also, think about your lights source, where it's coming from and what color it is. The sky in the background is a little too stylized and doesn't really read as a sky. Think about using reference, look at how lighting and textures play a role in the image. Also think about how the lighting will cause the buildings to affect the lighting on the buildings surrounding them.
This is a good start, now see how you can push it. Good luck.
Thanks a lot
I had this impression that it was miising something, but I didn'tknow what, thanks, I 'm going to work this better