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Thanks for your attention, and sorry for my no-update website!
bests for all,
I add little color experiment(21february05).
Last edited by jackoilrain; February 21st, 2005 at 12:51 AM.
Seriously, thats some good stuff!
Love the background on the pic with the girl.
The floors just marvelous
this is great looking work! the guy is a wonderful bit of design and texture.
the woman is a little stiffer than the man. sometimes this comes with over rendering what you think you know about anatomy, too much noseness, too much chiness etc. the background on her piece has too many hard edges as well that distract form her form and design.
i very much look forward to seeing other posts from you.
Thank's a lot for all crits, and especially for the detailed crits!
Jon, I've see your artwork inside the catalogue of the best illustrators of america, but i suspect that you have paint an marvelous HellBoy portrait
that you have bring with you at the SanDiego ComicCon around summer 1999/2000!!!
Anyway I know your art and your website (not only estetic art, but full of minds).
I'm sorry for my ugly english, i hope that my little words can explain my consideration about your art.
ok first thing i saw when i looked at the chick - her groin! um looks like she has a big bulge there
Hey, these are really cool!
I'm gona have to go check out your site.
But, I don't see the groin bulge.
these are a great start - you need to put more time into the detailing though. The girl for example is not even rendered from the knees down. Just the original line work which looks weird. Also I agree with foster the background needs either softer edges or a greater value range depending on what kind of mood you want.
Love the designs - keep at it man.