Phone Girl: Done in about 20 mins to see if I could draw someone holding a phone with their shoulder. Turns out I can't. The phone's too small, I know.
Anyway, I hate something about this but I kinda like the lighting so I though I'd post it and see if anyone could give me a specific idea of what makes it so loathesome.
Sad Man: I was just kinda sketching while listening to "Hey Jane" by Low Millions, a relatively bitter song. Anyway, he's not posing - he's leaning on a window that you can't see (because it's glass... and clean). I guess it took me about the same time as the phone girl: about 15-20mins.
Anyways, please let me know what you think.
Got a webcam or digicam? take a pic of you holdign the phone. It is an odd position, sort of, and yes the phone is too small, but you already know that. The biggest thing about phone girl is her eyes make her look a bit like a rapist. On the other hand, i really like the way you do hair It's crazy but it's controlled at the same time
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hee hee... rapist... I was going for surprised ("no WAY"), but I think I may have overdone it. Thanks for replying! I hope others will follow.
oh and thanks for the hair compliment... I would describe my hair-drawing method as "lazy" but "crazy but controlled" is much better