hey where is your nice paper texture in the background ?
good concept for the monster, how about making his first leg longer (more threatening)
nice portrait, (not much time on it , right ?) is it the same person your posted earlier
Your quick sketch portraits are so, so beautiful. Sophia Loren in 156 is GORGEOUS...you were able to captures such a rich facial expression with very simple line work. Looking forward to future updates.
Courtyard- I will try to do more for you! I enjoy doing those too. Thanks.
Zou- Thanks! Glad you like the shape. That's what I was aiming for. I agree about how the pilot is supposed to see. The left side is actually the front portion. I'll try to be careful with the design next time.
A new WIP? Maybe? Maybe not? We'll see...
Update on the WIP. Refining and getting rid of the lines. I'm also trying to push my rendering as well by experimenting with different colors, but still focusing on the values. I'm liking it very much so far. I wasn't expecting it to be the way it is now. I'll also add clothing on this guy and also might change the head as well. I just want to have a good foundation to work on first.
Last edited by Dizon; February 26th, 2009 at 10:45 AM.
good design and value.
i agree with hai for the troll, i think also you should concentrate on dynamism and pose more than muscles (yours are correct and that's a good point)
you can suggest some shadow of his legs just to show he's not flying
Thanks for poppin by with your helpful crit
Liking the updates, the last on I agree the head looked better with the first position, just because it felt more dynamic. Maybe having it look at the viewer to draw them in a bit? Am liking the progress on his muscles, especially his leg and shoulder.
p.s like the helmet design in #188 especially right at the top of the helmet, really nice loose details and blending. Would look good finished up.
I took a break on this guy, but I think I'm finally done with him. Sorry guys I tried changing the head but in the end I ended up really liking this one. I guess it's that paranoid/maniacal look on his face that I enjoy.
Thanks for the crits!
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#178; Nice creature. Spikes on the back are less saturated and detailed, but his tail in the far back isn't. Which I think looks a little awkward in terms of atmospheric perspective. Nice wet look on the legs. You may have gone into the detailing too early, at the front.
#182; You did some very nice things with the colours and texture. I liked the humanoid/creature blend, was looking forward to what you were planning with the weapon-arm. But a creature/creature is just fine. Teeth look a little 'soft', they're rendered like the skin.
#184; The real "metallic" feel may be missing, and perhaps the perspective isn't quite right yet, but the design is certainly there. Nice markings too. And fun to see vehicles from you.
#187, 188; Great portrait. Perhaps, you could have made the crevices between seperate plates thinner in the back of your images. For example on the sides of his head, you wouldn't expect to be able to look in between those armour plates.
#199; I'll try and add some different crits . Great expression. Head is 'behind' the shoulders, not sure if that was your intention. The back of his club is sort of blending in with the chest area. Nice going on those hands and muscles in general. Little question; are those some kind of markings on his shoulder? I can see some round shapes.
Hey Dizon! I love how you are taking a more concept art direction with your sb!
you even have some creatures in this baby now!
keep on posting your concept art but don't forget to sprinkle a liitle bit of porn in here once in a while ok?
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Anthis- You've brought up some good points. Thanks, man.
Angrypinoy- Kabayan! I will not forget the porn.....Promise!
Just a quick Watchmen sketch. Don't ask me about Manhattan's expression.
Last edited by Dizon; March 11th, 2009 at 02:07 PM.
Haha I don't even know what he looks like.. Cool color scheme you got going there.
I know it's all been done before, I want to do it again. I want to do it again.
Tangina, laki ng improvements ah!
Ganda ng mga caricatures..Sa mga book mo ba natutunan yun o dun sa drawing boards? They are correct about the head position, man! I'm taking about dun sa troll, not sa porn.haha
mga pilipino talaga naman...ang bastos!
Lol, It sucks that I'm asian. I can't help it if I look like a million other people.
My Sketchbook: Critics and Comments would be AWESOME.
Angel- Thanks! I agree about that axe blending in. Must be with the value.
Noodle- THanks bro!
Kool ka lang- Salamat pre! Glad you like the pron.
Meduza- Thanks bro! Much appreciated. Hanapin mo blog ni Tom Richmond. Dami siyang tips about caricature.
Kasper P- Thanks, man.
I'm doing a CHOW right now for the first time ever! I actually like the topic so I decided to give it a go.
She's called, "Mary of the blue lights".
Almost finished I think.
Last edited by Dizon; March 18th, 2009 at 12:36 PM.
Nice pic! the colours are effective, like an old oil painting . I like her expression too, can tell she's had a hard life.
Just one thing I noticed is her nose slopes out a bit too far from her face. I reckon if you just reposition her nostril to the right a little more to nestle into her face, it'll probably make the nose look straighter without you having to repaint it.
The Chow's are fun aren't they? It seems to have picked up alot recently as well, competition is tough..anyway, good luck