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Hello there, Thought I'd ask for some help and suggestions before going any further with this piece.
Any thoughts on how I can improve this, I was thinking of adding a space craft or satellite as foreground element on the right but we'll see.
Anyway, your thoughts?
Added in some detail, expanded the city and put the satellite in. Not really happy with the city but it's also not the focal point so I can live with it... for now!
Mmmm....I'm not a professional, but there's something with the satellite. It's like it has been cut from a different color paper and glued into this drawing.
Maybe it's because it's not finished yet, but it's like is not being a part of the whole drawing, but an intruder.
Yeah, I have to go back and fix that, I noticed that myself when saving the jpeg but didn't have time to go in and re-work it.
Use a bigger brush, you are scribbling too much. Using a big brush will aid you in thinking with planes and blocks, and improve your awareness of the values.
Brush up on perspective. Environments require correct perspective.
Seek interesting shapes and silhouettes right from the start. Your original silhouette is quite boring, and the satellite added as an afterthought is not a good fix. Plan these things beforehand.
Do many quick thumbnails before settling on a composition, it helps your thinking and gives you a range of ideas to improve upon.