I would like any general critiques on this one.
It was done in Copic Markers.
Hm. Where do you want to go with your art? Do you want to move in a more realistic direction, or a more cartoony direction, or what?
It's kind of sitting on the fence at the moment. Elements of it are very cartoony, elements look more realistic. Not, of course, that there's much you can do to change a marker drawing, if it's on paper. (Though you can move marker drawing around in all kinds of fun ways if you work on tracing paper).
I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).
True. I guess I mainly need some tips on how I can improve the scenery to look more realistic. The clouds/sun were mainly my problems.Not, of course, that there's much you can do to change a marker drawing, if it's on paper.
Other than that - get textbooks by Loomis, a pack of cheap paper, some pencils, and learn to draw.