Hi folks, would like a little feedback please. A while ago I posted a couple of attempts at a Drew Struzan style poster (just a personal piece). Got some much appreciated critiques and learned a thing or two about what I was doing wrong. Anyway, this is my third attempt at something like this within the last 18 months, I used a couple of the images from my second attempt which I still think work ok, but most of it is from scratch. Feedback as to how this looks would be much appreciated.
Anybody? Is this rough layout looking ok? Does it look balanced? Any feedback would be great.
I'm not really good at composition but it globaly seems okay for me... Looking a little longer at it, I just feel Alfred is a little lost on the side... I would move him a little maybe or shade him more... I would fade a little Bane on the external side too, because he is the only other "full body" character and have quite the same size than Catwoman... I bet you want her to attract eyes more than him, that's why I would hide some part of him.
What do you plan to put on the foreground ? I may be a pervert, but at a small image size the two round part make it look like female breast :p
I think it's a very good start, great face and lighting, I'm really waiting about the next step !
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