the light from the train to the face and arm needs to be adjusted more intense
the values on the mans back side can also be adjusted ,darker on his rump ,
this should bring out the emotion
so to sum up the values lighter on the train side and darker on the back of the man
also train tracks are needed to show destination
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If it's imaginary, would it be worth having some effect to indicate that? Something a bit unusual about the train to show it's different, like glowing or airy or brightly saturated or desaturated (depending on mood). Just a thought.
It also looks a bit small compared to the shadow nearest which looks to me like a human's shadow. Could add some other inmates for scale and to help with immediate recognition that it's a prison yard.