A sort of Candyland/Hansel and Gretel style concept thing. Here is the line drawing and the painting.
Last edited by StephenJ; December 26th, 2012 at 11:05 PM.
Looking good! Though there's a couple of perspective issues I can see:
1: It seems we should be able to see more of the top of the cylindrical Oreo thing in the front lawn.
2: The path on your line drawing gets thicker where it should be getting thinner as it leads farther away; the one in the painting feels it gets thinner when it should be getting thicker as it comes closer.
3: The pitch of the roof seems wonky on the porch. If you project the posts up as a rectangle and put a cross through the middle to find the centre then you should be able to work out the where the triangular shape of the roof should go.
I've done a quick (and by no means perfect) draw-over to show what I'm talking about:
Sorry, double post.
Last edited by sthelning; December 27th, 2012 at 01:05 AM. Reason: Double Post
Those lollipop lights are not in the same perspective as the house.
I like the way you've painted this with the soft edges giving it more of a dream like/ fantasy feel but it looks really flat in terms of contrast, try to push out the highlights on the candy floss trees and on the lollypops. I'm no expert to colour but it looks like you've mixed too many colours in places which makes everything look a bit.. dull? An odd example but this may help with your colour would be this picture and the video in general. Make your colours more saturated, more like colours you wouldn't see in the normal world.