starting a new sketchbook, I am looking for feedback for all my work. Hopefully I can provide feedback to people in return if they want it.
Here is a recent picture I am seeking critique/feedback for.
Hi Robert! I really like this piece. There's some great work on the characters, the monster in particular I dig a lot. Since you asked for crit, I'd have to say the weakest part is the background and I think it lies pretty much with the perspective. The rendering on it is great, but what I'd suggest is pushing the ground out at the same perspective as the rock formation the elf is standing on. Right now that, and the background behind it do not jive. The rendering on it is great, the structure needs work.
Depending on how shiny the blue light that is coming from the ground is too, I might suggest more blue on that side of the rocks. It seems like it should be more intense?
Dunno. Like I said though, love it! Keep crackin'.
Thanks for the feedback Vylla, I see what you mean with the perspective, cant believe I didn't notice that >_<
Anyway, here is a new concept