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Critique on what I can improve or somethin! thanks
Practice those 3 things and you should be good
Later I will show you the mistakes
I think that was a bit too general Capt Surge . Please elaborate more even if you're going to show stuff later. I am a little annoyed at just such a short critique. I do those regularly, and I am NOT saying that there isn't problems with the things you listed but atleast be more constructive about it. Thanks!
Last edited by Marlo; November 2nd, 2012 at 09:34 PM.
A few thoughts:
-You have the tail emerging from the lower back. Should really be following the spine.
-Hands need A LOT of work. Use references if there is ever any doubt. Actually, you should always use references whenever possible to better inform your illustrations.
-Gesture: I don't know what he's doing. Pelvic thrust? Power pelvic thrust? Have an action in mind, then a clear and strong gesture that communicates that action well.
I'll keep your tips in mind and dedicate my next studies in developing converying gestures and hands.
and hehe. POWER PELVIC THRUST. SUPER SAIYAN ARHGHRARH.
The arms needed to be fixed a bit and so did the legs. I fixed the origin of the tail as well. The pose does seem funny so I was messing around don't worry to much about it, good luck. ^_^