Love the pencil work! I'm partial to pencils tho.
The trick with water is that it can only give back the colors of its environment, just reconfigured in different puzzle piece shapes (plus highlights). Try to simplify into tabletop, surrounding walls, ceiling, plus some of you, maybe a little blue sky from the window out of frame... Everything makes sense. No chroma jumps. I think if you made the air above the blue water in your earlier study recede by greying it somewhat, and losing the high chroma blue in the stream it might look more natural.
Thanks so much PScissors, Jarkuzy and Kevin
Thank you so much, Lisa Ann! ♥ It was very helpful. This is the reference I was using, I'll find another one to study and some more still life.
Any crit to make this drawing look better is very welcome!
Thank you, Mangix!
Thanks, udonhead! Yup! I'll work on anatomy/proportion
Unfortunatly it will be hard to post trad sketches, I don't have scanner or a camera with good quality.
(My reptiles sketches looks just awful, I took the photo with psVita! Agh!)