Just really starting using digital tools, constructive crits welcome & embraced!
I've set myself the challenge of doing this finished challenge over on cghub (http:///forum/showthread.php?t=11830).
I more detailed sketch would do a lot of good here.
At the moment we're looking at a mix of octopus and a spider with 4 legs sniffing a flower. There isn't much to take in. The scale seems to be nonexistent and we have no way to tell whether it's a huge creature or a tiny insect. The composition is scewed and feels unbalanced. There is something incredibly wrong with the insect's legs, have you looked at any insects for reference? There is a sense of space however, with the trees in the background lighter. This is good. Basicaly, at the moment there is too little in the image to be able to give any constructive critique.
Good points to start with would be to gather reference on insects and how their legs work. Also, where are his right legs? Gather reference on how the head is contructed.
The flower is cool thought. I like the flower.
Hey Thanks for the pointers Thoolhoo i've tried to redesign the creature and the whole image really.
Edit: Some back story incase anyones interested in the direction i'm going to take this.
This insect would be found in some sort of alien forest the forest grows through some strange nutrients in the ground, the ground might glow, almost a radioactive green colour. The plants that my insect is about to feed off also have this slight glow and the insect to survive requires this resource so the areas that aren't covered by it's outer shell will glow because of this substance going through its body after past feedings. The shell or exo-skeleton of the insect protects it from the spikes on the plant.
Last edited by Katastrophi; November 30th, 2012 at 12:29 PM.