I agree with vices about the ‘3d feeling and the poses’, good job with those bodys! The suits have a metallic shine, looking cool!
I think that it was a phenomenal idea to start a sketchbook here,
cause it boosted up your art qualities, and has brought you to some
new unexplored junctions. A life changing experience. Your characters being
dynamic, need to say that I am mega motivated with the sketches, drawings that
you posted in #42, you said there that you have been drawing from 6PM till 2AM,
well that definitely payed off. I like to see improvements in such a quick and
effective way, maybe I am wrong, but I think that the character designs are
the strongest that I saw on the previous pages. I would also highlight those poses
in post #79. Well, you definitely have it. You just need to pursue it. Sorry
for not visiting for so long. You take care and keep working, I will try to keep up.
LtPlissken: Thank you for such for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful and encouraging comment I am and will be pursuing it.
Greenhouse: Thank you!
Vices: Thank you. I will
tabletoppler: Thank you, that's very motivating to read
Anyway, this felt like I bit off more than I could chew. I think I need to start with linework if I'm going to do a full illustration.
That's all for now
Sweet work! I love the sci-fi girls with armors!! I see you’re working very easy with the pen and brushes, that’s nice and it seems to be the right way to construct an image or a concept. Keep going, I’m very curious of where you're heading!
Thank you Greenhouse
Sketches. more later
Some progress on that last one. Any thoughts towards this piece are very welcome.
This whole thread shows a TON of improvement, congratulations are in order Lots of great studies, their impact is clearly visible when you go back to page 1.
I love how solid your designs and characters feel now: they have instant depth and form. Something I definitely aspire to being so glued to linework.
Great work overall, subbed!
Hey, nice sketchbook. In relation to your last piece maybe you could add a little atmosphperic perspective where the bridge is further away. Also, i think the shadows may be off. For example the shadow is right underneath the flying vehicle but the shadow from the structures on the bridge is different.
Morkai: Thank you!
Nestoronfire: Thanks. I'll try fixing it.
Some recent stuff.
meh. should be paying more attention to colours and composition.
damn consept art is full of top player!!! keep burning peoples eyes!!
hopefully you can tell who
Something for a school project.
An update and a new one.
It’s great to see so much improvement! You’re definitely heading in the right direction! I’m looking forward to seeing more
SophieW: Thank you
Worked on this some more after getting some advice.
Character expressions for school.
im loving your cyber-armour ladies they're aswesome! you've also improved so much in such a short amount of time! Did you find any especially useful resources when teaching yourself perspective?
check out my : SKETCHBOOK: All critiques much needed and WELCOMED!
wutangclam: Thanks . I learned perspective mainly through Loomis' book: Creative Illustration. You can find the book as a pdf using google. Other than that I just practiced the simple stuff over and over (i.e. boxes in 1,2 and 3 point perspective).
Doing some backdated CHOW's (or CharacterForge on cghub).
A new wip.
I paid special attention to correct perspective when constructing the body here. Quite happy with the result but any further notes are welcome.
Some sketches and some work on an older piece.
Some new sketches from this morning.