CLICK HERE TO GO TO THE LAST PAGE OF MY SKETCHBOOK.-------------------------------------
I think the last page of the sketchbooks in this part of the forums are good for quick critique on an artist who has a lot of pages. The last page is usually pretty current and one can easily give advice on what the artist is dealing with at the moment by looking at the most recent updates.
This is my sketchbook I'm 19 years old and really love drawing more than anything.
This is a simple sketchbook.
For the digital work, I use an intuos4 and programs like: Photshop CS5, Paint Tool SAI, Opencanvas, AutoDesk Sketchbook express and mostly free software.
For the other stuff it's usually basic traditional tools. I take scans or pictures with my cell phone.
MY OLD FIRST PAGE:slightly edited
Hello!, First and foremost i want to say THANK YOU to any comments or even VIEWS received on this thread of mine. Positive AND constructive criticism is so extremely appreciated i am just extremely happy someone or anybody at all out there, doesn't matter who you are is looking at my "art". Thank you thank you thank you, i can't thank you enough! for just acknowledging my art exists THANK YOU
Second!, To anyone who is trying to get serious and is new to this website I present to you my case and i hope you can relate to it or at least learn something:
So i was one of those people who was "ok" at "art"/"drawing" in high school. I loathe doing anything with my life that does not involve art 100%. Basically I want to make a career out of it so this is to anyone who wants to do art but is forced to do some boring degree and get some boring job. (No matter what you can incorporate art into your life some how even if you end up doing business or etc.) But i realize having that 9 to 5 job and then drawing on the weekend in your spare time isnt what you want to do either. Its difficult to figure out ...I have ZERO experience with anything like this I am 19.
So... one day I bought a wacom tablet because i had the same train of thought as the thousands of other aspiring ''digital artists. I got really caught up in getting the BEST materials... the best pencils the best paper the best version of photoshop all of these things. A drafting table ...the best pencil sharpener for F**k's sake. I stopped this useless witch hunt for expensive things that wont make me "better at art".... so to anyone who can relate i say to you... just draw... go ahead.. right now... before you read another word of this sentence before you finish this paragraph i want you to draw something, anything. any size and medium anything at all.
Grab some printer paper and a no.2 pencil and draw!
as a final statement i can say this... with my vast lacking of experience and knowledge (all im offering here is something to relate to/this can be esoteric to most) draw in a productive constructive way that you can build upon.
Noah Bradley's motivational thread => GREAT THREAD READ THIS
EDIT: Yes i guess having some really nice art supplies/materials or a Cintiq could improve you somewhat... but all I know is that even with my Intuos4 and Photoshop CS5 there are many... MANY people out there with JUST a pen or pencil (HB) that can create art far superior to mine. What I'm saying is.. its about the mastery of the tool. If you have printer paper and a HB pencil much isn't expected but if you have a Cintiq LARGE size you better be creating absolutely breathtaking peices of art! So take the pressure off of yourself b/c those people with just printer paper and pencils just imagine what they could do if provided the right art supplies! Build your skills before you build a studio.
Last edited by Shahan; May 21st, 2013 at 05:24 PM.
hi there sporus! really nice progress; I really enjoy the monster and character designs in the last pages. it's definitely good you're doing anatomie studies.
in the perspective stuff, I notice an error you keep making. you plot out your positions with horizontal lines, but neglect to double-check your vertical lines.
like in this creature:
you see the shoulders should be about on the same line as the front paws.. which means the head will stick out at us. (the head actually would have required a bit of a different angle because of this, but I just neglected that and made it so it's neck is turned towards us a bit.)
it is actually possible for the front paws to stick out like that, but then the back legs would have to counter and stick back a proportionate amount. but those were also sticking forward. just look at the square in the middle of those paws and follow the line up. so, made a quick pain over for you.
also, you complained about the lady superhero. actually, I really liked this one and errors were not all that apparent. but if you feel something is wrong, it is always good to check using geometric shapes put to your perspective.
here, I started with the feet, then checked the centerpont (red dot). this is theposition above which your center of gravity should be placed if the girl's feet had an equal weight distribution. but I gather from her stance that she has most of her weight on the back leg, so I moved her center of grafity back a bit. next, I placed geometric shapes representing the hips and chest. the rest is a rough pain in. I skewed the face a bit, as we are looking up at it.
anyway, hope you find all this usefull!
Last edited by ashess; April 29th, 2012 at 08:29 AM.
Yo, glad to have you active and posting! Sounds like you've got the drive and the right attitude, i bet you'll be going places in no time. Bridgman studies look nice and solid, good to see you trying to apply what your learning in your imaginative drawings. If you make a good habit of doing your anatomy studies constantly you will see big improvements in your drawings from your head. The mannequin sketches on the last post are interesting as well, have you read into any of Andrew Loomis' work? If not you can download his books here --> ( http://alexhays.com/loomis/ ) He's got some methods of teaching using mannequins similar to what you posted there(in fun with a pencil and figure drawing for all it's worth). May be of some interest to you.
Anyway, you're on the right track. Perhaps work on your line economy, less scratchy lines makes for an easier to read drawing, though that all comes in time. Keep it up!
sketchbooks are on sale.
I grew up drawing on printer paper my friends dad stole from work and pencils from walmart because I'm from a small town nowhere near an art store (the nearest one required a boat or plane ride)
Just love it and you'll get it done!!
Any-who, Your stuff isn't too shabby. and I don't think your perspective heads are as bad as you think.
Right now your putting the head in a box- don't be afraid to draw the guide lines for the rest. Draw the eyeline- mouth line. Practice simple combinations of spheres cylinders and cubes in different arrangements and different perspectives.
Breaking the head down into a simple form also helps.
Bodies can be done simply too, without resorting to stick people
I find boxes are good, but there's a bazillion ways to go about it
Looking forward to more posts !!
heres a sketch!
Last edited by Shahan; August 8th, 2012 at 10:24 PM.
As jeff siad stay focussed and keep it up!
So much dedication in this SB! Would love to see where you land in the future! TO GLORY !
I really like your figure drawings and poses! nice job!
Great thread, I can't offer any critique, you are beyond my capabilities at the moment. I'll be watching though. Keep up the good work!