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this is my first post here. I hope everyone likes this piece..
for a side by side comparison with the photograph used as reference for this painting.
To be honest, I'm not sure why nobody has commented on your piece. This website really gets to me sometimes.
Anyway, I think your portrait is beautiful (lovely detail in the eyes and hair), although I wonder if it lacks the skin texture seen on the model. The likeness, however, is excellent and quite close (I think you made her right eye a bit larger than on the model and your pic makes her look younger).
Overall, wonderful job.
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You did square off some of the features, making her face a little more angular and thin, and you took out some of the texture (in the teeth and skin especially), but it still looks good. Better than the reference actually. The hair is less frizzy, and the earring is smaller, but again I think those are improvements. You did make the forward eye a little too large.
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments guys. I agree with you about the skin texture, ear ring and bigger eye and all other issues. The thing is I wasn't trying to trace the photo. I was trying to capture the likeness of her and make her look much better than her photo. I don't know if that worked but I am so glad you guys liked it. Thanks again and wish me luck on my next art works.
Awesome portrait and pretty model too. Regards!
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Beautiful Job.....great likeness, and you made her look even better....those crits are just the observations of people who have incredible eyes...most would not pick up on any of that....but that's what we do here. The model is a beautiful creature, and you made her even better. Great work.
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The critiques are really great It will help me with my skills. Thanks for your comment.