I'm not sure your lighting is harsh enough and the pose is a little underplayed.
It's also hard to see is the light running into him or is he vomiting it out?
You might need to make it clear - if its flowing from the books into him you might want to show that.
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Venger love what you did there, i might just go ahead and do that
you just put it all into another perspective it has a lot more dynamics and strength
ill keep looking at it as a source to improve my current painting, hope i dont end up copying your paintover