Hey there, everybody) My name is Samir. So umm... yeah. Im 16 year old guy, who improves his art skills) Im just learning so it is long way to become good artist critique is welcome)
So lets start) (firs one is for the icon)
Last edited by ChaosTheory; October 9th, 2012 at 07:23 PM.
fantasyartist, thnx)i try to work better day by day)
Hey sam nice updates!
try to add some more variation in your line work. right now your sketches seem a bit messy, maybe just clean them up or make the "messiness" look more purposeful.
JohnsonTing, thnk u) I'll try, but i think i'm not as good as i should be)
Thank for your advice) im appreciated) I really need advices and critique)
Mila, wow) thnx) but i dont think they're so much insane)
I sometimes have problems with shadow/light part) so i think i have to work harder on it)
Hey there) Found my 2010 work for Lineage 2 contest) It's Baium)
Some quick sketch(about 5-4 minutes). I don't know yet, what it'll be) Maybe i'll finish this one)
Long time no posting here)
1) This is me sitting bored)(actually it's 5-4 min sketch of me)
2) Character design i made at free time
3-4) Designs for my upcoming manga comics
damn dude you're stuff is great, keep it coming! Especially since you're only 16, you still have so much time to learn.
keep it up!
Wow, good start dude, you have very good skills for your age, the skin tone pieces are looking good. I would suggest trying to make your lines longer and more confident in their direction and energy, that last sketch has quite a 'hairy line' thing going on, i.e. lots of little strokes which dissipates the energy.
Keep it up with the studies and I expect this will turn into a great thread.
ChristianWeeks, thnx) I try hard, but now i don't have too much time( In summer i'm going to work for serious!)
Lightpunk, oh) thank u very much) Yeah, i also have problem with good, long and confident lines(i knew that already, and thanks, that u noticed it))). I'll try not to disappoint u)
Make sure you draw her backside / spine straight too, since the view is directly from behind her. Also check the position of her left elbow according to the one on the right. Fix her left wrist, it seems like somebody took a bite out of it. It's also slightly thing compared to her hand.
Remember you're looking at the side which contains the muscles, veins and bones that bend the hand into it's position.
These are just some suggestions in my humble oppinion. I hope you find them useful.
You are doing great, i think you are influenced by the anime, don't get me wrong here, its nothing wrong with it, but when you are learning the basics, proportions, anatomy focus on you real life subject proportions, then you will know exactly what is exaggerated in anime, why is exaggerated, and how is!
The first portrait of Marilyn Monroe is very nicely done, proportion wise!
`Keep it com'ng