The link is broken for me.
hehe, don't worry, I fixed it so it doesn't make you look like a slow poster
yeah, not really on the anatomy, more on the style and the lighting
there are bits of anatomy issues like, the arm and chest...they both dont sit well. chest too big? upper arm too big? if his ?weapon? has that intense of a light where it turns white, then there will be definite light hitting everywhere! tone it down a bit to where its not blazing white. and the end of his weapon im guessin that is a metal material! it doesn't look like metal, its going to have some reflective qualities to it...so work on it more...good progress
Sorry if my crits sound as if I'm being mean, let me just say I'm not trying to be .
One of the major things you should work on is edge strength. Amost all of your edges are blurry or muddy, this is fine for clouds, smoke your background or distant objects, but not for your subject.
If your using photoshop use a harder edged brush for your subject, if your using painter try a different brush with harder edges or use a smaller brush size for your edges, or it looks like you may have blended your edges too much.
Some suggestions on composition:
He seems to have a sad look on his face, a sad look directed at his weapon. Is he sad about killing someone? I think it would be a good idea to cover the edge of his sword with dripping blood to help convey that. Of course this is just my interpretation, tell me what your trying to say.
Also, the cloth(?) on his arm looks a bit off, I gather it is a near translucent material, I think it needs to fit his arm a little better and tone down the strength of the part of his arm it covers.
Anyways, good work especially for a quickie, keep it up and I hope you work on this one some more. Be sure and post it if you do!