I really want to see the foreground pop more. If you skim downward through the post, you notice that everything is about the same chroma so it looks very flat which can also get confusing. I would like you to gray out the background and have higher chroma on the foreground to push them forward. Both your characters and backgrounds have the same line quality to them which makes them blend as well. Its not that bad, this is very well done and the color scheme is excellent, but it would make your work a tiny bit better.
My god, that was amazing. Just gorgeous.
very good. I loved the style and the story was also very cool. Is there a part 2 to this?
Great work, guy! I love your story and your drawing style very much
Woah, that was really good. Very different and strange, but in an amazing way. I love the weird style you have going.
"Complacency is the womb of mediocrity. " -- Jason Manley
"If you always put limits on everything you do, physical or anything else, it will spread into your work and into your life. There are no limits. There are only plateaus, and you must not stay there, you must go beyond them." -- Bruce Lee
I was planning to do a second part, but I'm not in a mood at least now. So, probably not.
I'm a bit tired with this guy, every page was redone at least 2-3 times.
Thanks for sharing, that was a good read. Great style too!
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Interesting and unique style.
I'm liking it, plus the muted palette works well too.
my sketches here... http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=92997
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I wish I could buy this, so amazing, the ending is almost perfect. Now this might be just me, but did hell spit her back out.
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JesArt Sketchbook, go have a gander..
JesArt, I'll probably print it with a couple of other stories around Fall.
And, um, it's supposed to be a he.
nice! very enjoyable story and i like that artwork...
Aah, Clo, thank youuuu! I'm so glad you liked it, you're one of my favorite artists in the world!! I hope you don't mind that I'm ripping you off so much hah.
Thanks so much, everyone!
I hope I can do something for publication sooon, so it can also be in bookstores and such.
Speaking of which, I recently printed a new run of Dead Fish, so if you'd like one, drop me a line! I also draw a special little sketch for everyone). And I sell it by the printing cost (3$). As for shops, so far it's only available at Isotope in San Francisco.