Art: 3rd year SVA animation (comment and check it out!!!)
3rd year SVA animation (comment and check it out!!!)
The sound design really doesn't work.
1) Terrible mic
2) All done by one person
3) No reason metal music.
The Animation itself doesn't look very well explored.
Very rarely does a first pass really work. Try again until it looks right.
The script could have been very funny in an adult swim sort of way, if you had drier deliveries and possibly more texture in the actual voice overs.
You seem to have a few high quality moments, I think you can bring the rest of the project up to par.
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