Ramsay looks really good, the chin work especially. You've really captured him. The VIZ layout is really impressive, I actually didn't comment the other day when I looked at it because I thought it was the real thing. Made me quite jealous. -'It's alright, I suppose' I thought.
Keep on going. Really good see you back on the horse.
Thanks mate, was't sure I'd made him craggy enough. The VIZ thing is gonna get sent to em soon, well, when I finish the other bits I ave planned but that shouldn't be too long now... Glad you like it anyway, more to follow
You keep goin too! oh an (no thanks, I dont use 'the horse')
Really like your new strip by the way, made me chuckle
whoa man, that piece with the dog is SICK
my only comment on it would be, whats the purpose of the type? is it what he's thinking? is it what he's hearing around him?
right now it doesn't seem to have a purpose other than to look cool... if its just what he hears around him, then it makes sense that the type is kind of random. he probably doesn't understand english.
so maybe where that shell is you could have some type that is in order, type that is legible that says something like "people are always telling me what to do... but life isn't about doing what you're told"
i would make it small, like its what hes thinking. then you could hid little bits of type around him like "sit" or "stay" shit like that. then all your type will have a purpose instead of just being eye candy.
i dunno, just a thought
complete2: Cheers for the comment, to be honest the piece with the hound in it was done years ago now,
an at the time the text was added after seeing a lot of Dave Mckean covers, which feature a lot text
(so yeah was there for no reason what so ever really)
Although you make an interesting piont, one which has not been raised in the seven years since it was created
.... I'll bear it in mind though
Ello all, not been on ere that much of late...
Anyway, ere's a sketch form a while back that I thought I'd work on this weekend, still got a lot to do on it (but thought I'd stick it on ere as work in progress) more to follow soon..... Ina bit!!