I kinda dont know where im going with this, but im just stuffin around for now.
Some kind of army thing maybe, the woman is the canoness. Thinking of putting little army dudes in the background (which needs alot of work)
Comments would be good! So feel free everyone!
I think this has a very nice concept to it. But you should work on the drawing more. Her facial anatomy is looking very off at the moment.
Yeah theres definitely something wrong with that white line on the side of her face, it shouldnt be there, i think that might be the problem. Gotta fix that up
Oh and her left boob is too high! lol
the eye seems to be at the wrong angle, the mouth and nose seem to be off aswell.
Neck is very very long, the helmet needs finishing. Iguess else its a nice enough concept.
hope thats useful
Did some touch ups. Not sure still though if its turning out but i think its looking better than the first one...
I got rid of that white line on her face and put more hair in front, as well as fixing the nose, mouth ect. I think the neck seems better too now
looking good mary! nice boobs, aahaha. yeh she has really big lips and very little chin and jaw. i would suggest decreasing the hight of the lips particularity the top lip, paint over after adjustment. and the jaw seems to be sinking into her neck i would knock back the shading casted by her check bone slightly. but more importantly paint her jaw line back using her natural skin tone. its good to see you on concept art. x
Last edited by Agathe; September 10th, 2009 at 10:49 PM.
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