Really nice start. Maybe spend a little more time on your figure drawings, I think that says 20 mins on your paper there, not sure if this is for a class or not or time limits you may have, maybe a bit more time should be spent, a hour or more if you can. Seems your reduction study is more advanced then the line work, maybe do more of those type if you can. Well do as many as you can, if you can. I'm not much for crits though, Keep it up.
seems like you have some issues in the hip region. Understandibly... I have problems with it too. Its just not somewhere that I feel comfortable "observing" when I am not in a studio class.
Anyway your work has a lot of (not positive this is a real word but I used to hear it a ton in school) Emotionality.
It would be cool to see you apply some of your skills to a narrative of some kind or some designs.