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This is my first post here.
When I started this picture my main purpose was to create some cool looking futuristic armor. My inspiration was manga high-tech robots.
Comments are most welcome.
I like your use of lights and how you've rendered the materials.
However, your anatomy is a bit off on all three. The shoulders look a bit wide, more so than the hips, and under the helmet the head would be a bit small. The one in the middle also has an upper arm that's too long.
As for the designs, I think they're cool, but chaotic. The one on the left is the biggest culprit in my opinion; the design has too much contrast and is hard to read. The helmets also stick out. In the middle one, there are a lot of hard angles and squares, whereas the armor is very curvy, so it doesn't connect. The same problem exists on the other two to a lesser extent.
I agree with tangle worm--sometimes it is hard to tell what are separate elements, and what are designs on top of the armor. The rendering is a bit blurry in spots, spend some more time cleaning up the rendering, and keep practicing design. You got a lot of potential with this piece
I agree with you : )
... And kudos for taking critique so well, too!
Make sure you upload another version once you've crossed these T's and dotted those I's, mkay? See if I can learn along with you...!
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