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Is this worth developing? Crits please and thoughts, likes/dislikes.
The woman's arm is too short, part of her arm is missing or something and i find the skin tone alittle too dull.
I think it is definitely worth developing
My website : CHOO3D
wow, thats just cool,,please finish the details
When you say skin tone do you mean hers, or his, or both. And by dull do you mean you'd like to see warmer/ more vibrant colors/ more saturation? . . .Yeah the foreshortening on her arm is not right, also her head should prob be looking up closer to where she's aiming, additionally her stomach area needs work-his left leg, etc etc. Any other crits? I think I'd like this to be a portfolio piece.
The composition is a bit cramped at the top. I would suggest that you crop it at the bottom or expand it at the top.
I really hope the exaggerations are supposed to be funny because the picture made me laugh.
The picture is really dynamic, good work on that.
My sketchbook http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=128951
More crits Please. Thanks.
Ok, I changed some things: Girl, new arm postions, head postion. Do you like? Not finished but I want some input crits on the new stuff. I agree on the tightness/framing of the image. I was thinking of adding about an inch on the right side--so we can give the girl some relief and see her blaster beter, and maybe 2-3inches at the top to see all of flashes sward. Any thoughts on this? Sugestions?
Obligatorily posting in this thread. I approve of this image (skintones need some tlc though!). Keep at it man!
Thanks flash. . .
1 Do you guys like the new arm positions?
2 I like his face, but I made her face more finished looking-should I do the same for him/smooth our his face some?
3 The back ground sucks I think. Its good b/c all attention is focused on the charator-BUT should I change?