The face is great! I can't wait to see how the rest of it turns out.
I almost want to see more of a twinkle in his right eye. The left can remain in shadow.
Blind in his one eye? I can only tell when they have an eyepatch. Looks quite fine by me, hope you can get the folds down.
Re: the blind eye, you might consider using the tried 'n' true (aka kinda trite) cataract effect, sort of a milky coloration. As it is it's the damaged eye that seems to be seeing the viewer, imo.
Re: clothing -- patches, frayed hems, dirt 'n' blood stains, maybe a spot of curry? (sorry, my Red Dwarf addiction is kicking up)
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Love it so far!
You might want to change the angle of his hand on the gun though because it doesn't look like he's properly holding the grip. It's got a really steep angle even though his hand looks like he's gripping something straighter than that.
Last edited by Meli Hitchcock; March 19th, 2009 at 03:57 PM.
The end of the sword is creating a bit of a tangent. Otherwise looks sweet so far!
Other than the previous comments, it looks great. I would add some rust or notches for aging the sword(it might look too shiny and clean for a pirate) and maybe to the gun as well. For reference, the obvious: Pirates of the Caribbean? You could check for the "funny" pirate couple. I think they wear the most worn out clothes of all.
I likes. Damaged eye is much better now with milky look.
I looked at your sketch book great structure and figure studies.
Looks nice, but unfinished. Put more details in the focal points.
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The rendering of the face is wonderful..
the hands & gun could use some detail though..
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