Hi there guys i hope you are all doing great ,im happy to post here again ..this is the first drawing that i did for myself from a long time so i hope you all like it ^^ crits and comments are welcome
Orcs are hunting today in this forest and they are hunting for humans ..hidden in the mud under the trees is the last survivor from his village .
Last edited by Alex Alexandrov; February 2nd, 2009 at 07:59 AM.
This is cool. The only problem worth mentioning is that the heads on the hunter's belt look larger than the human's in the foreground, which shouldn't be as they're further away.
I love it!
Im not sure about the hidden guy's wrist but overall this is really good.
Thanx for posting.
woow nize!! like the rendering of the guy with the sword and the coloring
wow! very cool!
sweet stuff 5 stars
P-Waf - yeah you are right but the orc is not so far away and the head with the open mouth that looks about the same size like the guy infrond . I dont know thank you for the comment next time smaller heads probably
S.M - im not shure about the wrist to so i can't say anithing thx for the comment
Oni Rem - thank you
Chupacabra - hi there Khan thx for the comment man i hope you are doing well
Rist - yea it shure do look alike (i dont know how to spell that) i hope that is a good thing ^^
Kuidf - thank you sir
I think you nailed it, I would only suggest that you try to make it even a bit more wet, maybe a puddle or some slick mud, or even more water reflection off some of the characters.
great stuff! got a nice lord-of-the-rings-feel to it!
ColumbusSage -yea it could use more wetnes but i didn't hawe the time so i just leave it like that it was for a little gallery
midknight523 - than k you
Josef K -hehe thx i hope that is a good thing
the painting rocks, dude, see ya on friday
Страхотно пич! Ръката ти много добре е нарисувала всеки един детайл от тази сцена! Найстина се чувства анимационното подражание в тази творба... не бих казал че е зрелищна и не би трябвало и да е, но найстина ми хвана окото! Очаквам още поразителни творби от теб! Всичко най-добро
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Nicely done Mood is really nice in this one. Scale works for me too.
I really really like this piece. The mood and rendering are great, but I feel like there are some compositional elements that don't work for me. The orc standing directly above the human appears to be poking the larger orc in the foreground in the butt, even though he is behind him in perspective. I don't really care for the orc on the far left running out from behind the rock. The way he is cut off by the shape of the rock just seems a little awkward - although I like the placement of that rock as a foreground element. The orc on the far right appears to be elbow jabbing the other orc in the arm, it also doesn't help that his expression is that of yelling.
I'm also confused about the big guy in the back. Why is he there? Was he there to battle, or help search, because it seems like he's slowing down the piece while everyone else seems to be running, or at least moving quickly. On the human, I thought at first he was holding something in his hand but then realized that it's just rim lighting. Everything else is great though, I'm not trying to rip you up, but I feel like a couple of compositional choices are all that's really holding back an otherwise exceptional picture.
Drazen -thx dude
Chuck,mate - thx Pat im happy that you like it
clanlord - thx za komentara man radvam se che te kefi
Beelow - thank you
Extollere - wow that is the biggest comment i ever had thx for it -you are right about almost all the things i think i got to spend a lot more time on the first sketch i guess ..i didn't put a lot of thoughts in it ,just basic composition i will have to dig deeper next time ,thx for the comment man